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Hirunath




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PostSubject: Poem to think about   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeFri Mar 07, 2008 7:56 am

Inspired by the Topic in the Tavern I just wanted to share a poem with you.
This is a poem I found 3 years ago. I never get tired of reading it.
It has a clear message.
It just spoke to me because IRL I'm a paramedic and I have come across scenes like this and they just shocked me to my core.
So everybody just take a minute to think about it.

The Final Act
by Lisa Teller

Screeching tires, shattering glass,
twisting metal, fiberglass.
The scene is set it all goes black,
The curtain raised the final act.
Sirens raging in the night,
sounds of horror, gasps of fright.
Intense pain, the smell of blood
tearing eyes begin to flood.
They pull out our bodies one by one,
What is going on, we were only having fun!
One of my friends is missing, what did I do?
Her scattered belongings everywhere,
in the road there lies her shoe.
A man is leaning over me and looking in my eyes,
"What were you thinking, son"?
"Did you really think that you could drive?"
He pulled up the sheet still looking in my eyes,
"If you'd only called your Mom or Dad, you'd still be alive!"
I started to scream, I started to yell;
But no one could hear me, no one could tell.
They put me in an ambulance; they took me away.
The doctor at the hospital exclaimed, "DOA!"
My father's in shock, my mother in tears,
she collapses in grief, overcome by the fear.
They take me to this house and place me in this box.
I keep asking what is happening,
But I cant make it stop.
Everyone is crying, my family is so sad.
I wish someone would answer me,
I'm starting to get mad.
My mother leans over me and kisses me good-bye,
My father pulling her away, she is screaming, "WHY"?
They lower my body into a dirt grave,
It feels so very cold, I yell to be saved.
Then I see an angel; I begin to cry.
Can you tell me what is happening?
she replies "YOU DIED."
I can't be dead; I'm still so young!
I want to do so many things - like sing, and dance, and run.
What about college or graduation day?
what about a wedding? Please - I want to stay.
The angel looked upon me, and with a saddened voice,
"It didn't have to end like this; you knew you had a choice."
"I'm sorry it's too late now; time I can't turn back."
"Your life is finished; that, my son, is a fact!"
Why did this happen? I didn't want to die!
The angel, she embraced me and with her words she sighed,
"Son, this is the consequence you paid to drink and drive.
I wish you made a better choice, If you did you would be alive.
It doesn't matter if you beg me, or plead on bended knee, There is
nothing I can do, you have to come with me."
Looking down at my family, I said my last good-bye.
"I'm sorry I disappointed you, Dad.
Mommy, please don't cry,
I didn't mean to hurt you, or cause you any pain.
I'm sorry all you're left with is a grave that bears my name.
I'm sorry all your dreams for me have all been ripped away;
the plans for my future all gathered in a grave.
It was such a stupid thing I did, I wish I could take it back;
But the curtain is being lowered.
SO ENDS THE FINAL ACT...
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PostSubject: Hm!   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeFri Mar 07, 2008 9:44 am

That is a very effective poem, got the deep side of me too, is it from a play?
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Hirunath




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PostSubject: Re: Poem to think about   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeFri Mar 07, 2008 10:40 am

No it's not.
The writer was inspired by all the news flashes about kids dieing in car accidents.
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PostSubject: Re: Poem to think about   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeFri Mar 07, 2008 2:11 pm

Aye, very effective Poem, really
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PostSubject: Re: Poem to think about   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeSun Mar 09, 2008 9:30 am

Well people I know it might be a bit too much but I wanted to share this with you.
Just one or two days after posting this poem this happened in the region in which I'm a paramedic.

Twee mannen aangehouden na dodelijk ongeval Leuven



HEVERLEE - De twee mannen die gisteren het zware ongeval in Leuven veroorzaakten, waarbij een
vrouw en drie kinderen omkwamen, zijn aangehouden. Dat meldt het Leuvense parket. De twee
Roemenen, 18 en 20 jaar, worden beschuldigd van onopzettelijke doodslag door verkeersongeval en
inbreuken op de drugwet.

I'll give a quick translation.

2 men who caused the severe car accident in Leuven yesterday, in which a woman and 3 children
(aged 11 to 14) died, were arrested. So say the Leuven detectives. The 2 romenian, Aged 18 and 20 are
accused with involuntary manslaughter and infrictions on the drugs and traffic law.


This is a note of myself which my work partner(who was on the scene) told me. The 2 guys who
caused the accident were driving 80km/h in a 30 km/h zone. They ignored the stopsign and no
brakemarks were found anywere. They were under the influence of drugs and alcohol.(later
determined in the hospital). And suffered only minor injuries.
The car of the victims was so smashed up that only after they removed the body f the woman that they could even determine that it was a woman or a man and only then they noticed that there were 3 kids in the car as well.

So this is a reminder that Alcohol, drugs and driving DON'T go together.

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PostSubject: Re: Poem to think about   Poem to think about Icon_minitimeMon Mar 10, 2008 12:06 pm

men, this is really really sad, the poem as the newsarticle Crying or Very sad
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